February 1st, 2010
I’m not big on poetry as a rule. It’s a taste I think. I like rock and roll, but not country. I like colas, but not coffee. And I prefer novels to short stories, and short stories to poetry. I think I’ve always been more enamored of the idea of something than its presentation, although I do prefer a nice presentation. Still, I think as a writer, developing skill with poetry is valuable and I have written poems. I’ll read the poetry in science fiction magazines when I see it, and usually like it, although rarely love it (could be me, or the quality, not sure).
Haikus I’ve always liked pretty well. They’re short, usually grasped in a moment’s reflection, and sometimes surprisingly profound or memorable. From Wiki, a very short definition:
Haiku (ä¿³å¥ haikai verse ) listen (help ·info), plural haiku, is a form of Japanese poetry, consisting of 17 moras (or on), in three metrical phrases of 5, 7, and 5 moras respectively.[1]
I’m about science and science fiction, and it’s fun to insert these into old, traditional forms. A lot of haikus are about nature, but why not technology? Or other science fictional concepts?
There is a lot of science fiction poetry out there already, of course, and, as it turns out, a lot of haiku in particular. There is in fact, a whole webpage and wike about SciFaiku. I love it! Check some out here and here, and a list of links here.
I thought I’d share a few efforts.
Never questioning,
Always working, the robot
Saves us time for what?
A big universe
too giant to comprehend
makes me feel little
My greatest nightmare
An evil robot monkey
Eating at my face
Teleport our team
To the blue planet below…
Wait! Wore my red shirt!
An ugly spaceship
Manufactured for vaccuum
Not for atmosphere
Quantum mechanics
Makes many worlds in my mind
And reality
A ray gun is fun —
until the alien pulls
out a bigger one
Have a favorite one to share yourself? Write it in the comments or send a link.
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If only it was possible to make a living writing scifiaku.
Or short stories, for that matter.
And I just don’t think I’m subtle enough for poetry, where that seems the ideal to many fans.
Hi Mike,
Hm, an interesting coincidence. Check out this:
http://www.tor.com/index.php?option=com_content&view=blog&id=58679#comments
Cheers!
Beat count not enough.
Seasonal reference too
must haiku have. Spring!
Ah, but are there seasons in space?
Maybe…
Need to give that more thought!
Sci-Faiku
Hard Science Fiction Frustration!
No Gravity Floors?
No Faster than Light Travel?
Goddamn you Einstein!
(Just Kidding!)
A Soong-Type android
Wanted to be human, but
Died saving Picard
Good one!